I would like to thank everybody that remixed/commented on my narrative. I found your advice very helpful. I just wanted to let you guys know that I really appreciate how you did not just do something stupid and minimal but rather tried to help me out. I know that my narrative is not as interesting as the others as it reads more like a historical piece of text rather than an enchanting story. Your advice helped me view my narrative in a different manner, ones that I hadn't really thought about or had assumed that my audience knew. For example, the advice that Jess told me about the location of Lebanon not being well known to everybody prompted me to insert a picture of Lebanon and a little globe so that you can tell that it is not in Afghanistan (as another friend asked me). I really just wanted to express my sincere gratitude from all that you have done and for you all taking the time to "remix" or comment or talk to me about the narrative.
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