Cory's final 10/10

I liked the story to begin with, so I'm glad it wasn't changed much. There wasn't much to change, since it was a recolection of thoughts. I did like that it was cleaned up a bit. The first draft seemed to sway off topic a bit.

Cory's Remixes 10/10

The video added to Caitlin's narrative, really livened the story up, as music does to many things. I liked your thoughts on why the video was added, it really made the story come together.

I liked all of the additions to the end of David's narrative. It was interesting. All of these videos are a refresher after a days worth of reading.

I loved the remix of my story. I wanted to do the same thing, but you did it for me which is perfect!! I also liked the humor that was placed into the text, and that any of your own remarks placed into the text were in parenthesis. I liked it so much that I based my final revision off of it.

overall: 20/20

KevinRb