Brian's narrative - I really enjoyed reading about Charlie in Brian's original narrative. I really felt like he did a very good job of describing who Charlie was as a person. I also think he made a good effort to incorporate some interesting links into his story.

20/20

Caitlin's Remix - I completely agree with everything Caitlin said at the end of your remix. I think you did a great job with this one. Good creative choice of a female counterpart to her Elvis story.

20/20

Stephen's Remix - I have to admit I laughed out loud when I saw this remix. I just kept thinking of Bush's face on the green fern from Stephen's story. Good visual. :) Although, I have to admit that I wish you would have done a tiny bit more with it. I think it would have been cool to see more president specific alterations to the story (although you did have a few good ones in there!). But overall really good idea for a remix.

20/20

Meagan's Remix - Hmm... how to grade a remix of my own narrative....Well I thought it was a really cute idea to do it from an animal's perspective. I like how you changed a good bit to suit the dog's thoughts and feelings, while still keeping the main parts essentially the same. good stuff. I think I'm being a softy here with the grades, but I really think you did a good job with all your writings, but if Trey disagrees with the grades I'm sure he'll let us know. :)

20/20